
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Kyla.
Tuesday, 21 February 2012
First Post For 2012

Wednesday, 23 November 2011
Wednesday, 16 November 2011
My Beautiful Place
Far beyond the edge of the sun comes my beautiful, secret, mystery place. Come closer and listen to me while I tell you my story about my beautiful place...
In my beautiful place I can hear the rustling of the leaves as they sweep across the bench of sand. I can hear the caramel fall running like it’s being chased by a robber. The blue sea crashing against my beautiful tropical island. My pop-corn was popping loudly as if someone’s child was throwing building blocks up into the air and watching them smash down onto the ground. The swaying of the trees sounded amazing. As amazing as a superstar being rewarded! The buzzing of bees and the fluttering from the butterflies’ wings. The tress singing along to my song that I’m singing to them...
I can feel the warm, brown, chocolaty tree trunk. I felt the excitement running through my bones as fast as a cheetah. The blobs of warm sand were coming through the tips of my toes as I was walking, the sand was heating them up. The money that was raining on me, made me feel like I was in heaven. I can feel the soft clouds. As soft as a fluffy pillow. I could also feel the fresh scented air...
I can smell the goodness from the jelly being made from the men in the mystery jelly maker factory. The smokey smoke from the fireworks. It was as smokey as a on fire! I can also smell the caramel blocks being divided into groups of four and being melted into the hot fall. The chocolate stream was nice and smelling hot because it was just made by the workers...
I could taste the different flavoured lolly-pops, ice cream and the jelly pops. They tasted as nice as apple crumble. The treats floating on my tropical island like popcicles, chocolate, lollies, strawberries, mints and much more other treats for you to eat! The long lasting taste from the smoky fireworks are also deliciously great too. The flavours are green for apple, red for strawberries, blue for blueberries, purple for grape, yellow for pineapple and much more fruits or tastes you can think of...
I can see candy canes sticking out of the grass, strawberries being dipped into chocolate sauce and the whole of my imaginative secret world. At night the candy canes glow until 3:00 in the morning and when it’s day time all of the little elves come out and then they do their work.
That was the whole of my beautiful, mystery place in between the edge of the hot sun and if you dare to come, would you...?
In my beautiful place I can hear the rustling of the leaves as they sweep across the bench of sand. I can hear the caramel fall running like it’s being chased by a robber. The blue sea crashing against my beautiful tropical island. My pop-corn was popping loudly as if someone’s child was throwing building blocks up into the air and watching them smash down onto the ground. The swaying of the trees sounded amazing. As amazing as a superstar being rewarded! The buzzing of bees and the fluttering from the butterflies’ wings. The tress singing along to my song that I’m singing to them...
I can feel the warm, brown, chocolaty tree trunk. I felt the excitement running through my bones as fast as a cheetah. The blobs of warm sand were coming through the tips of my toes as I was walking, the sand was heating them up. The money that was raining on me, made me feel like I was in heaven. I can feel the soft clouds. As soft as a fluffy pillow. I could also feel the fresh scented air...
I can smell the goodness from the jelly being made from the men in the mystery jelly maker factory. The smokey smoke from the fireworks. It was as smokey as a on fire! I can also smell the caramel blocks being divided into groups of four and being melted into the hot fall. The chocolate stream was nice and smelling hot because it was just made by the workers...
I could taste the different flavoured lolly-pops, ice cream and the jelly pops. They tasted as nice as apple crumble. The treats floating on my tropical island like popcicles, chocolate, lollies, strawberries, mints and much more other treats for you to eat! The long lasting taste from the smoky fireworks are also deliciously great too. The flavours are green for apple, red for strawberries, blue for blueberries, purple for grape, yellow for pineapple and much more fruits or tastes you can think of...
I can see candy canes sticking out of the grass, strawberries being dipped into chocolate sauce and the whole of my imaginative secret world. At night the candy canes glow until 3:00 in the morning and when it’s day time all of the little elves come out and then they do their work.
That was the whole of my beautiful, mystery place in between the edge of the hot sun and if you dare to come, would you...?
Monday, 14 November 2011
My Fitness Progress.....

My fitness goal is to run 11 or 13 laps by the end of term 4. If I get close to 11 then I have achieved my goal...
Monday, 26 September 2011
Using Google Maps
We learned how to use Goggle Maps and place pins onto the places where the rugby games will be played. Mrs Gleeson taught us how to use this so that if people were going to the Rugby games and they got lost, they would just look it up on their laptops or on their iphone2 and iphones.
Friday, 23 September 2011
Caprice Tokoa
It was windy and cold as I looked out from the stadium to see Piri Weepu...
As he walked out Mr Piri looked strong and fully fit. I already knew that he was born in 1983, 7th of September and that’s why he’s young. He is powerful, strong and fierce. Mr Piri has soft short black hair that is as black as monster’s fur. When he started leading the Haka he looked angry and big hearted! Mr weepu is 94kgs. Piri has a ta moko on his right arm and he has a baby daughter named Taylor. He is as bulky as a muscle man.
Mr Weepu likes to eat Mac Donald's (also known as the golden arches) and his favourite sea food is kina. Piri likes to play golf and rugby. His favourite thing to do while he is playing rugby is to lead the Haka. His favourite dog is a Bulldog.Piri hates bad people and he also hated English as well as Maths when he went to school.
As the game started, Mr weepu sprinted across the field like a cheetah. He played for the Junior All Blacks in 2005 and he won the New Zealand Maori Award also in 2005.
He moves like he was born to play rugby. Mr Weepu tries his very best to make his team win. Mr Piri shows intelligent sportsmanship as well as training well. He is a player who is determined.
As Mr Weepu ran across the field - others in his team defending - as he made his way to the try line. His number is 9 and while he is wearing his jersey it looks cool and he represents his team like an captain. The referee says that last try wins. His team cheers and they're all happy that they have won.
He shows New Zealand how good he is at the Haka and he isn’t afraid of showing off his personality and his career.
Thursday, 22 September 2011
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