Heal The World, Analysing Task:

Heal The World

WALT use our analysing skills.

Success Criteria:

I can...

Part of the song	What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?	Give an example from the text that supports this idea.	Give another example from the text that supports this idea.	Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed. -Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
Verse 1	The main idea in verse one is that you will always be loved in someone’s heart.	“There’s a place in your heart!”	“And I know that it is love!”	Yes, I agree with this part of the song because because someone is always out there waiting for you to come along and spend the rest of your life with them.
Chorus	The main idea in the chorus is making a better place for our lives.	“Heal the world.”	“Make it a better place, for you and for me and the entire human race.”	Yes, I agree with this part of the song because if we heal the world, our younger generations will get a better education and life.
Verse 2	The main idea in verse two is love and joyfulness.	“It only cares for joyful giving.”	“Love is strong.”	Yes, I agree with this part of the song because love is strong and being jyoful is a helping hand.
Verse 3	The main idea in verse three is joyfulness and our world.	“We will shine again in grace.”	“Will reveal a joyful race.”	Yes, I agree with this part of the song because grace and joyfulness is a key to beginning a new life with happiness and courage.
Verse 4	The main idea in verse four is saving the children and world.	“For you and for me save the world.”	“For you and for me save the children.”	Yes, I agree with this part of the song because our world is getting worser and worser each day.

Analysing Worlds Greatest, R. Kelly

The World’s Greatest by R.Kelly

WALT use our analysing skills.

Success Criteria:

I can...

Part of the song	What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?	Give an example from the text that supports this idea.	Give another example from the text that supports this idea.	Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed. -Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
Verse 1	The main idea in verse 1 is Greatest and I am The Best	“Oh, I am a vision.”	“I am a mountain.”	I agree that this part of the song is explaining that he is strong and wanting to inspiring others.
Chorus	The main idea in the chorus is freedom and making it.	“I’m that star up in the sky.”	“I’m the world’s greatest!”	I agree with this part of the song because it makes R. Kelly’s audience think about what they want to do and it inspires them because as he says in his song “Hey I made it! I’m the worlds greatest!”
Verse 2	The main idea in verse 2 is heroism and inspiration.	“And I am a hero!”	“I am a helping hand.”	I agree with this part of the song because he says he is a hero and people will look up to him as a hero.
Verse 3	The main idea in  verse 3 is belief in his self that he will make it through the dark times in his life.	“I saw the light, at the end of the tunnel!”	“And faith was right there.”	I also agree with this part of the song because it deeply explains how he got to the place he is now and how God helped him when he struggled.
Verse 4	The main idea I verse 4 bright hes the world's greatest	“And I’m that little bit of hope”	“I can feel it”	I agree with this part of the song because he is fierce and the strength is expressed within this part of the song.

Key Factors Related To Decision Making.

This is my brain storm about the question above. It has words around it to describe what the question is and these are what we came up with!

Lizzy: Similes:

This is a presentation completed by myself, but written by a year 4 child named Lizzy. She has wrote similes and added a illustration to make it better.

Chapter 7: War In Waihi: TIC TAC TOE

This is our Chapter 7 Tic, Tac, Toe presentation. Be sure to leave me some comments including FF and FB!

My Friendship Poem 2013

Friendship

Friendship is love and care that you cherish,

Let none of your friendships perish,

Hope and belief,

Brings so much relief ,

Friendship involves flesh, blood and bone,

Machines like some have no feeling especially drones.

Friendships are as bright as a pale moonlight,

Shining on you might be a delight.

Friendship is a speck of light,

That should glow ever so bright,

No friends of mine should have to suffer,

Just to prove that they are tougher,

Tell no one their secrets,

Let no one seek it,

Take your friendship to your grave and after life,

Keep it safe and never tell them a lie,

Take the road that leads to peace,

Me and my friends shall release,

The painful times that we suffered

Will only make us tougher.

By: Caprice Tokoa

This is my poem which relates to peace and friendship. Friendship a special gift. You cannot buy it or sell it. To make a special friendship like me and my friends have, you have to respect their opinions and relate them to your self some how. Leave me some comments which include FF and FB about my work!

Our Class Movie - Finders Keepers

Sometimes you lose stuff and gain stuff but at the end of the day its is important to take care of your belongings or else it will be the finders keepers game.

 

Our School Movie Trailer - Manaiakalani Film Festival

Click play to view the trailer of the movies our school have made for the Manaiakalani Film Festival this year. 

 
Manaiakalani Film Festival Trailer - Tamaki Primary School Movies from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.